This is a very slow going game, The art style. voices, and music are spot on for the mood, and mesh very well to make a great final product, but the actual game play is extraordinarily slow going and has a lot of room for improvement.
For one, how am I suppose to feel any sense of urgency when the character moves the same no matter what's going on? Every time Doug would sneak into the supplies, I would double click, hoping to inspire the character to hurry, but instead he'd take a step backwards, and then immediately turn back to the bar. There should have been some way to run instead of doing some sort of chill walk back and forth. I personally think that the keyboard should have been used instead of the mouse, because it would probably make the player feel a tad more involved, the mouse makes the game feel detached.
All in all, I think it had great potential, but just wasn't really quite there as a fun gaming experience. And I'm sorry to say (on a random note), but you are beating the hell out of a series that doesn't really have roots yet, you should just focus on the initial series before putting all your time into branches of it that don't even include your main character. The Larry Episode 1 rocked, and I am seriously looking forward to episode 2, but it doesn't seem like it's ever coming out, you haven't mentioned anything about an "Episode 2" since October 2009. Oh well, all your work still rocks out-loud, so I am looking forward for whatever your next release is.